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Dear,
My name is ××, I write this letter to you in order to apply the senior .net engineer. Thanks for you spending your time to read my letter. Following is my resume:

Brief Summary:
A bachelor of ×× University of Electronic Technology. After graduated from school, I work as a programmer for about 3 years. During that time, I worked in the field of .Net and Mobile Phone short message development. In my first company, My main responsibility is to design the website of our company and the mobile message development. After thar in my second company I mainly responsible for the development of the web application software base on different clients. At the last October I came to shanghai and get a job development a web communicate platform. I have already made a great progress in my technology.
I think I am a man with the characters of initiative, confidence, curiousness and perseverance. I would appreciate it if you could give me a chance. I will keep on working hard and create more Values.


Technical Skills

Primary Skill
Asp.net(C#) , XML, Javascript, Sql Server
Secondary Skill
Network maintance
Education Bachelor of GuiLin University of Electronic Technology
Total IT Experience 3Years
O S Window 2000, Windows Server 2003,

Projects Experience (From the latest/recent)

1.Duration: 2006.11－2007.3
Project Name & Client Name ×× website
Role: Develop and test

SELECTED ACCOMPLISHMENTS

* This website mainly used the technologies:ASP.NET(C#),SQL,JAVASCRIPT,AJAX
* Developed the background application for managing the website.
* Design the database structure.
* Developed the application interacting with data from sql server 2000.
* Tested all the functions to concern if they are working.
* Maintained the website confirm it running correctly.

2.Duration: 2006.5－2006.8
Project Name & Client Name Enterprise Manager Platform
Role: Develop and test

SELECTED ACCOMPLISHMENTS

* This application software mainly used the technologies:ASP.NET(C#),SQL,JAVASCRIPT
* Developed some modules of the web application, include: system manage , user manage , department manage.
* Design the related database structure.
* Developed the application interacting with data from sql server 2000.
* Tested all the functions to concern if they are working.

3.Duration: 2005.8－2005.11
Project Name & Client Name Survey Platform for HonFa Techonlogy
Role: Develop and test

SELECTED ACCOMPLISHMENTS

* This web application software mainly used the technologies: ASP.NET(C#),SQL,JAVASCRIPT
* Developed some modules of the application, include: Information manage, Clients manage , system manage.
* Design the related databasse structure.
* Developed the application interacting with data from sql server 2000.
* Tested all the functions to concern if they are working.

4.Duration: 2005.6－2006.7
Project Name & Client Name Agriculture Technology Information platform
Role: Develop and test

SELECTED ACCOMPLISHMENTS

* This website mainly used the technologies:ASP.NET(C#),SQL,JAVASCRIPT
* Developed the background application for managing the website.
* Design the database structure.
* Developed the application interacting with data from sql server 2000.
* Tested all the functions to concern if they are working.
* Maintained the website confirm it running correctly.

5.Duration: 2004.8－2005.4
Project Name & Client Name Mobile Message Development
Role: Develop and test

SELECTED ACCOMPLISHMENTS

* This website mainly used the technologies:ASP,SQL,JAVASCRIPT,AJAX
* Developed the background application for managing the website.
* Design the database structure.
* Developed the application interacting with data from sql server 2000.
* Tested all the functions to concern if they are working.
* Maintained the website confirm it running correctly.


* 基本技能:
1.程序设计: ASP.NET(C#);
2.数 据 库: SQL SERVER;
3.其 它: Javascript , AJAX , XML ;
* 工作经验:
2006年11月----2007年4月,×××公司,作为一名网站开发人员,主要负责公司网站的开发于维护,在公司期间升级了公司的网站;
2005年 5月----2006年9月,×××公司,作为一名应用程序开发人员主要负责程序编码工作;
2004年 8月----2005年5月,×××公司,主要负责手机增值业务的开发以及公司彩铃网站的开发维护;
* 项目经验:
1.2006.11 ---- 2007.03,网站的开发与维护,负责网站功能的实现以及后期运行的维护,主要包括:用户信息管理,网站的管理,信息发布与管理,主要使用的技术:ASP.NET + AJAX + JAVASCRIPT + SQLSERVER;
2.2006.03 ---- 2006.09,企业短信开发平台,主要负责相关模块的代码实现以及测试,负责的模块有,部门管理,客户管理,信息管理,短信管理,系统模块管理,同时也负责相关数据库的设计以及子模块的开发设计,主要使用的技术:ASP.NET + JAVASCRIPT + SQLSERVER 2000;
3.2005.11 ---- 2006.02,客户回访管理系统,主要负责相关模块的代码实现,负责的模块有,用户权限角色的管理,单位内部管理,客户管理以及回访信息的采集和处理,主要使用的技术:ASP.NET + JAVASCRIPT + SQLSERVER2000
4.2005.07 ---- 2005.09,农业科技信息网，主要负责网站后台程序的开发和测试，主要包括系统管理，用户管理，权限管理，信息发布以及审核，主要使用的技术:ASP.NET + JAVASCRIPT + SQLSERVER2000
5.2004.08 ---- 2005.05,短信平台开发，主要负责公司移动彩铃网站的开发和移动短信业务的开发，主要使用移动公司提供的接口来和移动公司进行信息交换以及数据同步，主要使用的技术:ASP + JAVASCRIPT + SQLSERVER2000

[jwillowt]

看不懂...帮顶

[Avoid]

能完全看懂一半，猜懂另一半。。。

[Rudolph]

半懂不懂

[jinpeng_dotnet]

英语不太懂，汉语感觉看着还是没有啥的，因为小弟也是刚入行！

[jolinkyo]

項目經歷寫得太少了
至少要包含，你做過什么項目，你在組織中是什么位置，你做了些什么，有什么結果

這是重點，尤其是跟你要應聘的職位相關的經歷要重點寫

最后再送你句職場原則：老板不會關系你會什么，而是關心你做了什么

[awen177]

貌似桂电的？

[Overriding]

楼主要投外企的话恐怕要挂了.^_^.

My name is ××, I write this letter to you in order to apply(apply for) the senior .net engineer. Thanks for you spending your time to (spend...doing) read my letter. Following is my resume:

Brief Summary:
A bachelor of ×× University of Electronic Technology. After graduated from school, I work (时态有问题)as a programmer for about 3 years. During that time, I worked in the field of .Net and Mobile Phone short message development. In my first company, My main responsibility is(时态有问题) to design the website of our company and the mobile message development. After thar(typo) in my second company I (缺少谓语)mainly responsible for the development of the web application software base(用词错误based on) on different clients. At the(多余的定冠词) last October I came to shanghai and get(时态问题) a job development(不知所云) a web communicate platform. I have already made a great progress in my technology.
I think I am a man with the characters of initiative, confidence, curiousness and perseverance. I would appreciate it if you could give me a chance. I will keep on working hard and create more Values.

很有很多地方写得太多的是中国式英语.