其实第一个人的英语底子很好,小小的语法错误不影响正确的语感,那是很难学到的
不仔细看看的话还行,反正能读懂。仔细一看不堪入目,语法和用法都有问题。特别是提问的那个,两三句话里就有好几个词不达意的地方。红色的地方是错误,蓝色的地方是用法不合适。相比之下,LZ倒是谨慎得多,尽量用简单语句和语法,以减少错误。
Compare to your brilliant achievement, I feel quite ashamed that I spent six years inreach in reaching ten thousand per month.
You're excellent.Would you pls. share your successful experience with us? Thanks a million in advance. [/quote]